Friday, January 19, 2007

frosted flakes falling from an effervescent sky,

flitting and floating on the frozen atmosphere.

this crisp, sugary cereal swirls up so high and

down to caress my cheeks, freezing my tears.

2 Comments:

Blogger dayaoyao said...

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9:52 AM  
Blogger Emily said...

I wrote you a long beautiful comment, and it deleted.

I hate blogger.

The point however, once you delved past all the wordy randomness of my ramblings, was:

A) I liked your use of the word effervescent.

B) I love English and can't wait to take it next year.

C) I miss you bee.

10:28 AM  

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